love it.... omg.. awesome... could have done without the trance horn, but w/e
WHAT SOFTWARE DO YOU USE????
No bass.. wut
Lacks a bassline... I think it would sound great with the melody you have. Mix it up with broken bass hits with the beat and sustain bass sequences.
you need to listen to it on a car lol coz its got a nice clean bass .
The rain needs to start at the very beginning, but it adds awesome effect.
Also, the melody seems kinda all over the place... pattern is hard to find.
It's good for menu music though.
Thank you for your opinion and feedback about this theme !
you lose a point for ripping off the Meet the Press theme song. love it though.
I'm Canadian and have never heard the Meet the Press theme, so any similarities are unintentional... could you link me to it?
gonna address what I understand
Good song. I don't like gansta rap, but I am not going to rate based on that cuz I know it is a matter of prefrence. The beat and rhymes are quite "phat home skillet" so good there. The only thing I can advise you on is backing.
You are uswing a synth lead that has a cool tone, but the pitch bending does not go well with the beat, which is the focus point in rap. It is really distracting and like >_< "uggg, my head" If you want to keep the pitch bending, hide it behind a solid lead following the melody with note change at each beat. The melody is pretty good. And cut the talking that breaks up rap lines, kills the chain and makes it kinda lame (shit, that rhymes)
Also have another cool suggestion: I would make a choral repeating line in between stanzas that follows the melody distinctly, not singing, but more pronounces... like "Then I pull em under, my eyes blood shot red..
no rest, no sleep.. i'll stop when I'm dead.." that would sound pretty awesome
not bad, can touch it up though
Wow! Thank you for the awesome feed back! Trust me I agree with you SO much with the instrumental, but it's not our beat. The original song is by Busta Ryhmes and Jadakiss. This song here is goin' on a mixtape which will be available for free ((No copyright infringement! xD!)) . Also, you're right 'bout the adlibs, they do cut the lyrics. I agree. I will go over them and adjust the levels. I really appreciate your time and honesty.
Peace and Love
Beautiful! Glorious work on the melody! The only problem is the lead seems a little sharp, making it kinda annoying. Fix that and you got a killer!
It's good, I like the piano esspecially, but the main part is so... percussive. There is no flowing background chords or harmonics. It sounds like a constant breakdown; like it is lacking a major portion. If you were to make some backing with half or whole notes to complement the percussive lead, then it would sound great.
I am sorry, but this is the best song of all time.
Bounc3... ...why don't I find that at sam goodie? this is my favorite song of all time, it beats everthing else i have ever heard, no shit, not trying to be nice, just is.
To be honest, in a way your music saved my life.
how--- uh its my work out music, for some reason the energy in all your songs pushes me one step further, that extra mile (literally)
this is true, after burning your cd, i ran longer, harder. lost 65 ilbs in a month. I was fat and near suicidal, now i am happy and thin.
Ya could have saved my life, and considering i am biology expert, god knows how many others if you know what i mean. thanks. (p.s. my parrot is on my desk right now, and as i was typing this listening to Pardise she has fluffed up and is singing along!! she loves it!!!)
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