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No bass.. wut

Lacks a bassline... I think it would sound great with the melody you have. Mix it up with broken bass hits with the beat and sustain bass sequences.

Pokemeon responds:

you need to listen to it on a car lol coz its got a nice clean bass .

decent

The rain needs to start at the very beginning, but it adds awesome effect.
Also, the melody seems kinda all over the place... pattern is hard to find.
It's good for menu music though.

RidvanDuzey responds:

Thank you for your opinion and feedback about this theme !

really cool

you lose a point for ripping off the Meet the Press theme song. love it though.

MortalKombat400 responds:

I'm Canadian and have never heard the Meet the Press theme, so any similarities are unintentional... could you link me to it?

gonna address what I understand

Good song. I don't like gansta rap, but I am not going to rate based on that cuz I know it is a matter of prefrence. The beat and rhymes are quite "phat home skillet" so good there. The only thing I can advise you on is backing.
You are uswing a synth lead that has a cool tone, but the pitch bending does not go well with the beat, which is the focus point in rap. It is really distracting and like >_< "uggg, my head" If you want to keep the pitch bending, hide it behind a solid lead following the melody with note change at each beat. The melody is pretty good. And cut the talking that breaks up rap lines, kills the chain and makes it kinda lame (shit, that rhymes)

Also have another cool suggestion: I would make a choral repeating line in between stanzas that follows the melody distinctly, not singing, but more pronounces... like "Then I pull em under, my eyes blood shot red..
no rest, no sleep.. i'll stop when I'm dead.." that would sound pretty awesome

not bad, can touch it up though

Naysly responds:

Wow! Thank you for the awesome feed back! Trust me I agree with you SO much with the instrumental, but it's not our beat. The original song is by Busta Ryhmes and Jadakiss. This song here is goin' on a mixtape which will be available for free ((No copyright infringement! xD!)) . Also, you're right 'bout the adlibs, they do cut the lyrics. I agree. I will go over them and adjust the levels. I really appreciate your time and honesty.

Peace and Love

~Naysly

All songs are free to use under CC. Do not need to ask permission. I don't log on often.

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